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Wednesday 15 January 2020

The Story Of Yusra


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  1. Keep up the great work!

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  2. Tēnā koe Danait, how is your summer going? I hope you are enjoying the sunshine!

    My name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m part of the Ako Hiko cluster but I’ve just popped over to the Manaiakalani cluster to check out some of the learners’ awesome blogs! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.

    Thanks for reading some new information and posting about Yusra Mardini, she is an incredibly brave young woman isn’t she! Did you know anything about her before you did this activity? I didn’t, so your post definitely taught me something new :) It’s amazing how some people can experience so much scary and harmful stuff in their life but still succeed, and therefore be inspirational to others.

    I can see you’ve tried really hard to put the information into your own words - ka pai! Just a reminder that whenever you post online, every single sentence must be put into your own words, instead of just changing a few words.

    Thanks for blogging and have a groovy weekend,
    Eliza :)

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    1. Thank You Eliza!
      Thanks for the advice and to be honest this was one of the hardest activity because of that reason. See it was really hard for me to do that because maybe it was a Non Fiction story (not trying to brag) but I usually don't have a problem at that kind of stuff even if it is Non fiction actually But this activity took me a long time.
      Thank you! :D

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